I really like the idea of removing all the unnecessary layers of baggage and "lightening up." The layers of clothing were a nice visual representation, and I like how you were able to move faster and more freely as the layers came off. Good job!
I think the words scrolling throughout the video helped to really spell out the meaning. I also like the way you shed your layers in a public place on campus whereas you put them on in a much more secluded area.
I really liked that you incorporated a poem within your piece. Really interesting. I liked that you showed putting on clothes and also taking them off. It was a good idea to have someone do it with you too. Very Clever!
I really like the idea of removing all the unnecessary layers of baggage and "lightening up." The layers of clothing were a nice visual representation, and I like how you were able to move faster and more freely as the layers came off. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think the words scrolling throughout the video helped to really spell out the meaning. I also like the way you shed your layers in a public place on campus whereas you put them on in a much more secluded area.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you incorporated a poem within your piece. Really interesting. I liked that you showed putting on clothes and also taking them off. It was a good idea to have someone do it with you too. Very Clever!
ReplyDeleteInteresting use of text, none of the other performances had them. good job.
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